Monday, January 8, 2024

They Haven't Taken My Phone Yet (edited and hopefully improved)

 This posting consists of the first three chapters edited, at the link, for anyone who feels like reading over it. 

Most of the new stuff is in the third chapter, but not all of it.

I include here the link to the whole thing so far.

They haven't taken my phone yet.docx


 



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